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Time to finish : 12-15 hours
Stock for shirt by : :iconfaestock:

OMFG This took my whole Tuesday. AAAAAAALLLLLDAAAAAAAY!
I'm really proud of it, though. I actually put effort into something. :]

I'm hoping to put this kind of effort into all of my drawings from now on. No promises, though. e -e;;

Comments are loved.

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:iconfabosaurus:
Oeh, very amazing! You can sure see the effort you put into this picture :) Well done <3

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:iconpirata-de-libertad:
Thanks :3

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:iconzerodragon:
:eager: DUUUUUUUUUUDE!!!!
I see how much effort you put into it. :lol: It's so friggin' amazing!

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:iconpirata-de-libertad:
:D

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:iconveddabredda:
Dis so coool.

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:iconpirata-de-libertad:
Thank you. :]

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:iconrobotribble:
For the record I -love- this picture, and I'm not a furry fan, but I don't judge art based on content, ever.
Unless it's shitty Sonic fanart of porn or horrible Jhonen Vasquez ripoffs.
Her shoulders are actually a bit wide from her chest. There's a lot of muscle and tendon and skin and ribs that fit there perfectly - rotator cuffs, muscles connecting your shoulders to your chest (men can flex their manbreasts due to this muscle. Women have them, but their fat and mammary glands are all on top), there's also some fat there regardless, especially for women - so her chest should actually be a bit wider.
Also I never understood why people don't draw the bottoms of the ribs after the brests. women are shaped like > <, and the top of that hourglass is mostly ribs. Arms are also a bit more straight. Like two long tubes, with muscles poking out in specific places; they don't really taper at the elbows. If anything, they get wider.
As I've stated before I am insanely jealous of your crotch wrinkles, but women have fewer. The way hers are make it seem like she's bunched her jeans up into her cooch (something very uncomfortable, if you ever get one I do not recommend it) and do go a bit too far down her tighs; at the length they are, they shoudl be running a bit more horizontally. Also unless she has shoulder pads in her shirt, the shoulders should slope, especially for women.
That's about all I can think of. Oh, also her calves should start sloping out a bit sooner. For girls with skinny legs, they're more straight as opposed to thigh-tiny knees-calves.

Lol, you asked for criticism, and there you go. I seriously love this picture, especially the eyes.

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:iconpirata-de-libertad:
Thank you x3 Really, thank you so much. :] I knew there was something wrong with the shoulders, but I liked the way it looked, so I left it, lul.

And yeah, after looking at it for a while, I see the issues with the pants. I'll work on the wrinkles :P

*works on next pic*

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:iconrobotribble:
xD
Wellll I still like it.
I just never got the shoulder thing.

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